Project critique, criticism, or encouragement.

Lt._Dan_Braxton's picture
June 9, 2017 - 11:20am
Refer to: Lt. Dan Braxton : A UPF Pilot's story.

Lt._Dan_Braxton's picture
June 13, 2017 - 10:25am
Okay readers. Changed the ending for 111.1 FY.
Give it a second read. It now works for the best.
Both endings were possible, but, this one makes
more sense to the character's structure.

JCab747's picture
June 27, 2017 - 4:13pm
I noted that you cancelled your project. I haven't been able to check out or contribute to the website for a couple weeks now due to family and work concerns. Should you reconsider cancelling and deleting things, I would certainly be willing to help.

It can get discouraging when you post items and feedback is lacking, but we all face real life crisis that keep us from our hobbies or, in this case, even reading some older posts... which I need to do in other forums.

Best Regards.
Joe Cabadas