Aramax One

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Anonymous
November 26, 2010 - 4:37pm
I'm in the middle of remastering this adventure. I've also corrected the British English. :-)
If anyone has high-res scans of the images and the Imagine cover that would be helpful.

jacobsar uploaded a word version and I have a .jpg scans of each page.
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w00t (not verified)
December 1, 2010 - 10:04am
Thanks to iggy for the image from SFMAN 03.


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w00t (not verified)
December 1, 2010 - 11:40am
For the record I'm also adding fluff to the text. For example;
original wrote:
On the right hand side of the gate, at a height of 1 m, is a cardlock.Beyond the gate is the building, with a carpark in front of it. Several vehicles and two ground cycles are parked there.
new wrote:
On the right hand side of the gate, at a height of one meter, is a card-lock access point. Beyond the gate is the building, with a car parked in front of it. Several vehicles and two ground cycles are parked there as well.

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TerlObar
December 1, 2010 - 1:15pm
You have at least one translation error.  Please reboot your poly-vox

carpark != car parked
carpark = parking lot (i.e. a park for cars Smile)

Unless the car you mysteriously parked there is actually mentioned later.  I haven't read the article but based on the snippet you posted it sounds like a parking lot not another vehicle.
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w00t (not verified)
December 1, 2010 - 6:02pm
Terl, 
Good catch. I've changed words like boot/trunk and misinterpreted carpark.  

et all,
I wanted to mention that I'm not happy with the layout of that article, it does not flow well. I'm going to be changing it up a bit. Part of me would like to see the original layouts, but that's what scanned PDF's are for. :-)

I'll upload a copy here for review. 




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w00t (not verified)
December 1, 2010 - 8:51pm
Thanks to jacobsar for the original scanned images. :-)